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Still

after 6 years of knowing the presentational you, it has taken up till now for you to drink from the Waters of Wisdom. Many times you turned over a new leaf; Still you never knew what you thought you should have known. My how you've grown moving mountains to suit your path Still time has robbed you blind and you are behind life's schedule Still giving up the destiny you have foreseen is obscene to even fathom. I think of you in my alone time. It's almost as precious as the day, that day 6 years ago Still our merriment ride is your past life and you continued alone. I only ask of you to continue to drink. Your thirst is as deep as the knowledge you seek and for that I am proud. ....Still

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Date: 1/27/2014 8:22:00 PM
poignant thoughts and memories reflected in this Kira good pen Shadow x smile hug
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Kira Price
Date: 1/27/2014 9:01:00 PM
thanks a lot! and yes the memories were the sole reason that created this lol
Date: 1/12/2014 8:14:00 PM
'Still' is a question remaining...nicely penned
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Date: 1/12/2014 8:29:00 PM
thanks!