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Still

As a swift tempest making it's way towards us yet we only wait.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/20/2009 8:30:00 AM
This is great haiku. so, still means stillness. Thank you for commenting my poem. I'm looking forward to read more of your haiku.
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Date: 4/20/2009 6:19:00 AM
Beautiful. Ryhmes. pls insert the title in one of the lines, i.e. yet we still do wait (5cylb). I wish you all the best.
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Date: 4/19/2009 8:08:00 PM
Nice work on your haiku, perfect description of waiting patiently...Raul
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