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Still

As a swift tempest
making it's way towards us
yet we only wait.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shahwan Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 8:30 AM
This is great haiku. so, still means stillness. Thank you for commenting my poem. I'm looking forward to read more of your haiku.
Shahwan Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 6:19 AM
Beautiful. Ryhmes. pls insert the title in one of the lines, i.e. yet we still do wait (5cylb). I wish you all the best.
Moreno Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 8:08 PM
Nice work on your haiku, perfect description of waiting patiently...Raul
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