Stifling the Day

I hide the emptiness
digging a hole in the head, unending pain
bury a stiff smile
between huffs of breath

It's almost a mystery
it can almost be unheard
the cloud in my eyes, almost curling
too imperfect for words

I dig this smile into a hole
snatched by my last breath
as the wound reaches beyond
an imperfect heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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August 14, 2014 at 9:41 PM
Juaneco, stopping by to read and enjoy your poem once again. :) Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's Home Page..... Always & Forever ~LINDA
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February 20, 2012 at 2:06 PM
i often enjoy poems like yours as they captivate the mind without losing the messege intended. Well done this piece is wonderful.
Brown Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 6:01 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Juaneco. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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February 19, 2012 at 6:47 PM
Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it,
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February 19, 2012 at 2:59 PM
Juaneco I like this touching poem you writing today. - oxox Anne-Lise
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