Suresh Iyer Poet Lyric

Stick

You walk with me
Untiring, unmoved
I cannot move ahead
Nor can you behind

We stick together
Our life forever
I have one leg
Your have one leg
With you we have two legs

We stand, fall or rest
Not know what will come next
I give you a virtual life
You give me a leg
The day I meet my grave
You give some other a leg

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Matthew Anish July 2, 2011 at 7:49 PM Dark vision here - well written. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 17, 2011 at 12:06 PM Suresh this is elegant and your metaphors are unique and enticing .. lovely poetry ..thankxx for your sweet comments on my work..always welcome and appreciated ..happy Sunday..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta April 15, 2011 at 5:30 PM Beautiful personfination of leg as a nice metaphor of support or help in life, Suresh

Sara Kendrick April 15, 2011 at 2:53 PM Enjoyed your personification of the stick or walking stick..Very creative..This reminded me of my husband's father..Tthanks for the kind review of my work..Sara