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You walk with me
Untiring, unmoved
I cannot move ahead
Nor can you behind

We stick together
Our life forever
I have one leg
Your have one leg
With you we have two legs

We stand, fall or rest
Not know what will come next
I give you a virtual life
You give me a leg
The day I meet my grave
You give some other a leg

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/2/2011 7:49:00 PM
Dark vision here - well written. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/17/2011 12:06:00 PM
Suresh this is elegant and your metaphors are unique and enticing .. lovely poetry ..thankxx for your sweet comments on my work..always welcome and appreciated ..happy Sunday..luv..
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Date: 4/15/2011 5:30:00 PM
Beautiful personfination of leg as a nice metaphor of support or help in life, Suresh
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Date: 4/15/2011 2:53:00 PM
Enjoyed your personification of the stick or walking stick..Very creative..This reminded me of my husband's father..Tthanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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