Alexis Y. Poet Rhyme

Stew and Sue

Stew is so shrewd he sued
Suzy Sue,
Who sat and spat at a gnat, 
Sally viewed and stewed
snails and sailed with a Sailor








*This is all I got for the “New Tongue Twister” contest 
Help!!!!!
folks I got nothing else lol!


01/ 12/2020

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Gershon Wolf January 23, 2020 at 11:14 PM Well, I can't get through the first line even 4 times fast without blowing it. So. this good by me! Smiles, Alexis! :) Gershon

Paul Callus January 19, 2020 at 10:11 AM Hi Alexis, Nina is looking for a tongue twister with a fun side to it, so I am sure she'll be smiling when she reads this :) Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos January 17, 2020 at 11:02 AM Hi Alexis, I think this is a win - its like she sell, sea shells on the sea shore. Good luck my friend. Blessings Jennifer.

Caren Krutsinger January 12, 2020 at 9:48 PM I think it is enough, and Nina will too.

Gershon Wolf January 12, 2020 at 5:53 PM The words 'Sue stewed sugary...' tied my tongue, Alexis! :) gw Alexis Y. January 12, 2020 at 6:06 PM Hi Gershon, You made feel good. But Nina is such an exceptional writer and she is looking for the correct twist and write. I got mad respect for her:-)