Stew and Sue

Stew is so shrewd he sued Suzy Sue, Who sat and spat at a gnat, Sally viewed and stewed snails and sailed with a Sailor *This is all I got for the “New Tongue Twister” contest Help!!!!! folks I got nothing else lol! 01/ 12/2020

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/23/2020 11:14:00 PM

Well, I can't get through the first line even 4 times fast without blowing it. So. this good by me! Smiles, Alexis! :) Gershon

Paul Callus

Date: 1/19/2020 10:11:00 AM

Hi Alexis, Nina is looking for a tongue twister with a fun side to it, so I am sure she'll be smiling when she reads this :) Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/17/2020 11:02:00 AM

Hi Alexis, I think this is a win - its like she sell, sea shells on the sea shore. Good luck my friend. Blessings Jennifer.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/12/2020 9:48:00 PM

I think it is enough, and Nina will too.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/12/2020 5:53:00 PM

The words 'Sue stewed sugary...' tied my tongue, Alexis! :) gw

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/12/2020 6:06:00 PM

Hi Gershon, You made feel good. But Nina is such an exceptional writer and she is looking for the correct twist and write. I got mad respect for her:-)