Stepping Through Time

Stepping through time The song it was sad, such a desolate melody We danced to a weeping of horrific dreams Symphonies lost as the days go uncounted Steps keep the tempo, delusional scenes A pirouette frown lingers sorrowed poetically Her hand is cold, almost lifeless in mine And in those eyes, distant teardrops are echoing Staring the ending not far down the line Depression illumines the dark shadows crawling Moon light deceives like an absentee star Violins pluck out a lonely notation High pitched and weary like bells in a jar Stepping through time to the lonely days harboring Soon it will be but a waltzed aftermath Holding her close midst the demons now battling This, the last dance, me and Sylvia Plath
2/7/17 Written for the: Stepping Through Time Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues
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Roberts Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 3:01 PM
Congrats on your placement ,Chris
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February 13, 2017 at 3:10 PM
Thanks so very much Donna.
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February 10, 2017 at 2:18 PM
You wrote a lovely poem. As I was reading it, I found myself being lost in it.Amanda And The Dog poem came to me in a dream. I remembered it, then wrote it down. this poem you wrote is a 7
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February 13, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Thank you so very much Darlene
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February 9, 2017 at 10:59 PM
I am a fan of Sylvia Plath! "Pirouette frown, bells in a jar" Congrats on your win!
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February 13, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Thank you so very much Kim
Daniel Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 3:47 AM
What a deep poem, just to suit Sylvia :) a winner:)
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February 13, 2017 at 12:08 PM
Thank you so very much Jo
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February 8, 2017 at 7:56 AM
Hi Chris, You've penned such a well written sad write. I must go and look this writer up. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven-Alexis
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February 8, 2017 at 9:53 AM
Thank you so very much Alexis, I am glad you liked this.
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February 7, 2017 at 8:45 PM
I'm trippin for this poem. A FAVE! Good luck Chris, wishing you all the best :)
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February 8, 2017 at 9:52 AM
Thank you so much Akkina.
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