Stepping Onto Cloud Nine

Where ever you are darling 
love will always be smiling 
sweetly living inside warm 
Each heartbeat a mirror bell 
ringing deep reflections draw 
sparkling gold on your beauty 
diamond gem treasuring 

Walking the seven steps together 
the way of truth and love our friendship 
Destiny paints a path colored dream 
holding under a rainbow promise 
Magical strengths in our resistance 
falling under enchanting magic 
Spelling powerful feelings sing out 
soft chanting echoes silver whisper 
upon a cloud love you house the dream 



wrote in heavenly syllable count
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 11/13/2014 11:06:00 PM
Now this is style! Flows so well, one might even conclude you are Irish!!!!! A7 for Me
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/14/2014 3:10:00 AM
i am irish smiling arthur sending you an auld irish blessing heartfelt beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciated
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/14/2014 2:55:00 AM
ah peter your so kind thank you so much for the truly beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated dear pal
Date: 11/13/2014 10:21:00 PM
Your love poem is very beautiful and romantic my dear friend Liam I enjoyed reading it. A 7 for you! love and hugs! xxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/14/2014 3:07:00 AM
dorian thank you for an amazing beautiful comment dear friend your always so sweet heartfelt appreciated bless yoi
Date: 11/13/2014 3:19:00 PM
Wonderful write Liam...The 2nd stanza was my favorite...
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/13/2014 3:21:00 PM
thank you joseph wonderful comment deeply appreciated thank you kindly
Date: 11/13/2014 2:56:00 PM
With a beautiful heart such as yours she will be soon climbing into your arms...cheers
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/13/2014 3:02:00 PM
oh i do not know much about that tim wonderful heartfelt beautiful comment thank you kindly dear friend misted the eyes bless
Date: 11/13/2014 2:45:00 PM
- Oh, Liam what beautiful and sweet poem ... (like your new avatar :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/13/2014 2:51:00 PM
smiling anne lise i only took that the other day standing outside just thought a change of profile everyone will see me lol what am i like thank you deeply beautiful comment dear pal bless you
Date: 11/13/2014 12:34:00 PM
Very beautiful and enchanting Liam. Almost a musical touch.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/13/2014 1:02:00 PM
you're so sweet brenda thank you ever so kindly dear friend truly very beautiful comment bless you
Date: 11/13/2014 12:20:00 PM
wrote in heavemly syllable count indeed.Soft flowing verse Liam.May you go up those seven steps with the one who would love you sincierely.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/13/2014 12:48:00 PM
smiling charmaine i need wings first lol joking about, wonderful comment floating in the clouds ha ha bless you dear friend thank you deeply
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