Liam Mcdaid Poet I do not know?

Stepping Onto Cloud Nine

Where ever you are darling 
love will always be smiling 
sweetly living inside warm 
Each heartbeat a mirror bell 
ringing deep reflections draw 
sparkling gold on your beauty 
diamond gem treasuring 

Walking the seven steps together 
the way of truth and love our friendship 
Destiny paints a path colored dream 
holding under a rainbow promise 
Magical strengths in our resistance 
falling under enchanting magic 
Spelling powerful feelings sing out 
soft chanting echoes silver whisper 
upon a cloud love you house the dream 



wrote in heavenly syllable count

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Arthur Vaso November 13, 2014 at 11:06 PM Now this is style! Flows so well, one might even conclude you are Irish!!!!! A7 for Me Liam Mcdaid November 14, 2014 at 3:10 AM i am irish smiling arthur sending you an auld irish blessing heartfelt beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciated Liam Mcdaid November 14, 2014 at 2:55 AM ah peter your so kind thank you so much for the truly beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated dear pal

Dorian Petersen Potter November 13, 2014 at 10:21 PM Your love poem is very beautiful and romantic my dear friend Liam I enjoyed reading it. A 7 for you! love and hugs! xxx D. Liam Mcdaid November 14, 2014 at 3:07 AM dorian thank you for an amazing beautiful comment dear friend your always so sweet heartfelt appreciated bless yoi

Joseph May November 13, 2014 at 3:19 PM Wonderful write Liam...The 2nd stanza was my favorite... Liam Mcdaid November 13, 2014 at 3:21 PM thank you joseph wonderful comment deeply appreciated thank you kindly

Tim Smith November 13, 2014 at 2:56 PM With a beautiful heart such as yours she will be soon climbing into your arms...cheers Liam Mcdaid November 13, 2014 at 3:02 PM oh i do not know much about that tim wonderful heartfelt beautiful comment thank you kindly dear friend misted the eyes bless

Anne-Lise Andresen November 13, 2014 at 2:45 PM - Oh, Liam what beautiful and sweet poem ... (like your new avatar :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Liam Mcdaid November 13, 2014 at 2:51 PM smiling anne lise i only took that the other day standing outside just thought a change of profile everyone will see me lol what am i like thank you deeply beautiful comment dear pal bless you

Brenda Meier-Hans November 13, 2014 at 12:34 PM Very beautiful and enchanting Liam. Almost a musical touch. Liam Mcdaid November 13, 2014 at 1:02 PM you're so sweet brenda thank you ever so kindly dear friend truly very beautiful comment bless you

Charmaine Chircop November 13, 2014 at 12:20 PM wrote in heavemly syllable count indeed.Soft flowing verse Liam.May you go up those seven steps with the one who would love you sincierely. Liam Mcdaid November 13, 2014 at 12:48 PM smiling charmaine i need wings first lol joking about, wonderful comment floating in the clouds ha ha bless you dear friend thank you deeply