Stepping Inside Oneself

~ Stepping Inside Oneself ~

 Uncertainty shadows the hollow the stream…
A stroll through a battlefield of broken dreams…
Pieces scattered from walls to ceilings…
A puzzle of sins and subconscious feelings…
It climbs from the ashes of burnt redemption…
Inside a prison of one that bleeds salvation…
Behind ones soul sits a staircase made of scars…
Leading to a door left purposely ajar…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/24/2014 7:40:00 AM
I am amazed at the depth of emotion you create with such few words, you are a master communicator.
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Date: 6/22/2014 6:13:00 PM
A very deep and reflecting poem, Michael. Long time no see. what the heck has been going on??? I hope you are ok. I enjoyed seeing a new post from you today, and I can see you have been very busy with a few other poems. Hope to hear back from you soon and see your other new poems!
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Date: 6/22/2014 12:33:00 PM
with such depth, you managed to convey the need to soar high amidst life's brokeness, michael... nice to see you again; splendid piece.. hugggs
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Date: 6/22/2014 12:15:00 PM
- For those who dare to look into the door - Really well written .... by the master himself - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/22/2014 11:20:00 AM
Dear Michael, It is good to see you here. Being introspective can lead to sad feelings, much like those you described so well here. That "staircase made of scars" is always waiting for us. Sometimes we have to step outside ourselves to find peace and happiness again. Excellent poem that is also thought-provoking. Love you, dear friend. Carolyn
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Date: 6/22/2014 9:48:00 AM
Great work! Thanks for sharing : )
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