Step Up and Lose

Many of you claim to be the best.
But silly little children prepare to fail this test.
You try you fail.
Im the wolf you the stupid 
dog that  chases its tail.

A razor blade tongue just as sharp my wit.
Breaking the simple minds.
The weak always quit.

I pick my battles careful so should you.
Just as has begun.
You find it's through.

I am the villan  I thirst apon your 
hate.
If you thirst for destruction
then step apon the plate.

I am your reaper  take a number
and get in line.
Far beyond a childish destroyer
so many victems ive left behind.

Anyone wants to lose there welcome to
try.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/17/2010 7:18:00 PM
I just had to come back and laugh!!!! :-) :-) it is funny how you posted a second poem clearly about my childish ways and than deleted it. Hmmm! makes me think you want me to come after you,, Sorry I destroy not slam.. ha ha ha..! :-) have a nice one ,..p.d.
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Date: 8/15/2010 10:56:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Slam. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Somehow I don't believe you will be needing any help. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/14/2010 8:29:00 PM
Chchchchills down my spine. As bugs bunny said "Them's fighten words". Nice one. Welcome to the soup
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Date: 8/14/2010 11:13:00 AM
better yet, why don't you just come at "me" with your best. i have to be consistent with what i have said in my rhymes and accept any challenge offered. but, please just make it a little more interresting for me. don't waste my time. read some of my other post and come at me correctly. happy hunting. this could actually be fun.
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Date: 8/14/2010 10:21:00 AM
i have to follow up on what s.k.a.t and p.d. said. first i laugh then i critique. before any of us decide to take you seriously you are going to have to step up YOUR game. try to be a little more consistent with your rhyme scheme and i "might" engage you. happy hunting.
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Date: 8/13/2010 10:27:00 PM
Nice to meet u Slam Master.. unfortunately a few weeks ago Poetry Soup decided to do away with the form known as Slam.. its now all listed as Free Verse... we had three slam contests last month.. awesome.. they are on my list.. winners also.. luv.. looking forward to more from u ..
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Date: 8/13/2010 10:22:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. looking forwrd to many more..with luv..
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Date: 8/13/2010 8:12:00 PM
I am laughing so hard now why didn't I think of that name. You sure beat me to the punch!!!! Lol!! I think the soup just became a playground. Now talk about childish.,....p.d.
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Date: 8/13/2010 6:16:00 PM
LoL, CUTE LITTLE SLAM. MY DAUGHTER TRIED ONE THE OTHER DAY. IT HAD A BETTER BITE. SORRY JUST BEING HONEST, BUT YOU DO HAVE A GOOD SLAM HAND*luv~SKAT
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