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Second attempt at Haiku using Stella De Oro Daylily....Sara

Stella De Ora Ii

Stella De Oro One beautiful daylily.. Bloom bees landing strip
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Dey Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 7:10 AM
wow!! my young poetess you are really gold. Thank you with regards with all my heart.
Maverick Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well done Sara..! it is a beautifull write.) it shows me that as well as the Eagle} "the bee also has landed" pleasure in your words today..)
Horne Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 1:17 PM
I can see those bees landing - lovely haiku, my friend
Lu Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 12:39 PM
excellent poetry. will miss ya dear poetess, left 1 standing..... :) when one door closes another opens ;)
Sivey Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 3:30 PM
This is so very true, the "bees landing strip" that's exactly the way they are! They land to get the pollen but must see the landing strip to get to it! Your poem is quite wonderful here Sara! I love your write completely my friend! Great Work!!
Roske Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 2:30 PM
beautiful - and lucky you if miss stella is blooming already.
Onclaud Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 1:49 PM
seem stella is soo attractive that bees love to land on her, sara..a most enthalling 'ku!.. best wishes and hugggs!...
Keys Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 1:41 PM
soft and sweet. thanks, chuck
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