Stella De Ora Ii

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Second attempt at Haiku using Stella De Oro Daylily....Sara

Stella De Oro One beautiful daylily.. Bloom bees landing strip

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Chittaranjan Dey

Date: 3/29/2012 7:10:00 AM

wow!! my young poetess you are really gold. Thank you with regards with all my heart.

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/29/2012 12:00:00 AM

Well done Sara..! it is a beautifull write.) it shows me that as well as the Eagle} "the bee also has landed" pleasure in your words today..)

Jack Horne

Date: 3/28/2012 1:17:00 PM

I can see those bees landing - lovely haiku, my friend

Cindy Lu

Date: 3/28/2012 12:39:00 PM

excellent poetry. will miss ya dear poetess, left 1 standing..... :) when one door closes another opens ;)

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/27/2012 3:30:00 PM

This is so very true, the "bees landing strip" that's exactly the way they are! They land to get the pollen but must see the landing strip to get to it! Your poem is quite wonderful here Sara! I love your write completely my friend! Great Work!!

Ann Roske

Date: 3/27/2012 2:30:00 PM

beautiful - and lucky you if miss stella is blooming already.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/27/2012 1:49:00 PM

seem stella is soo attractive that bees love to land on her, sara..a most enthalling 'ku!.. best wishes and hugggs!...

Chuck Keys

Date: 3/27/2012 1:41:00 PM

soft and sweet. thanks, chuck