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Steep Leap Tb

ice pick digs deep breath spews thick mist foot hold must stick peak steep cold slope stay calm keep hold success not cheap 1st placement Charles Messina sponsored Bauk-Than 3 rows of rhyme highlighted in bold and italics Written 25/12/2020 4 syllables 2nd, 3rd, 4th words/syllables rhyme 4 rows with three rhyme patterns

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/17/2021 5:07:00 AM

I can relate to this in life and experience! Can you believe it! I’ve walked a glacier twice in Alaska. It took endurance, certainly no complaining and also worth it. Our leader would chisel stairs. Congratulations! Love it for many things! A fave!

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/17/2021 5:53:00 AM

wow Kim! how exciting!! wish I could do that! I am planning a trip to see himalayan mountain peaks but from the safety of short treks! Thanks for the kind supportive comments!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/16/2021 2:29:00 AM

Congrats on this expanded winner. Sara

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/16/2021 4:15:00 AM

Thanks Sara! I was reading a book on mountain climbing when I entered the contest!

Charles Messina

Date: 2/15/2021 9:26:00 PM

Well done, Krish. Congrats on your 1st place win!

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/15/2021 10:12:00 PM

Thanks Charles! delighted! Thanks for the generous placement!