Steep Leap Tb

ice pick digs deep
breath spews thick mist
foot hold must stick
peak steep cold slope
stay calm keep hold
success not cheap



1st placement
Charles Messina sponsored
Bauk-Than 3 rows of rhyme highlighted in bold and italics
Written 25/12/2020
4 syllables 2nd, 3rd, 4th words/syllables rhyme
4 rows with three rhyme patterns

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 2/17/2021 5:07:00 AM
I can relate to this in life and experience! Can you believe it! I’ve walked a glacier twice in Alaska. It took endurance, certainly no complaining and also worth it. Our leader would chisel stairs. Congratulations! Love it for many things! A fave!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/17/2021 5:53:00 AM
wow Kim! how exciting!! wish I could do that! I am planning a trip to see himalayan mountain peaks but from the safety of short treks! Thanks for the kind supportive comments!
Date: 2/16/2021 2:29:00 AM
Congrats on this expanded winner. Sara
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/16/2021 4:15:00 AM
Thanks Sara! I was reading a book on mountain climbing when I entered the contest!
Date: 2/15/2021 9:26:00 PM
Well done, Krish. Congrats on your 1st place win!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/15/2021 10:12:00 PM
Thanks Charles! delighted! Thanks for the generous placement!
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