steel in the sky hiku
For Sir Brian Strand's 1400 Poetry Contest
1 August 2025
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// \\ iron fingers reach
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/_|___|_\ the clouds through memory’s stare ~
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///| |\\\ Paris holds its breath
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Copyright © Bernard F. Asuncion | Year Posted 2025
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