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Steel Bars

Tried to trace this man, studied the case and had my plan, a soul is whispering from somewhere asking for help, I said, back off !!! But a call is a call it searches my soul and being, then found myself doing it i must say, back off to this man! Met him and succeeded invited me to his place, we proceeded, as I enter his great place full of goons, must I back off from it? No...! He offered a drink as he mixed, he went for a while to change his shirt, so when he came back and drink his piece, Alas! 10minutes, he went off asleep! Traced the walls for possible passage, and I have found where she was a savage I hurriedly searched for the lock and there I found hanging at the back of her life size portrait in grief profound! I ease to unlock by the key I got and quickly lift her up, help her to get up we walked pass by the sleeping monster tried cautiously to escape away from there. Damn, he is awake! He advanced to kick threw it hard so quick too glad I managed to kick back in a glimpse! I reached my gun, hidden on my waistline, Aimened vigorously, with authority Stay where you are! Back off !!! He tied her up, used her for his cover-up, urging needs of flesh he had... Damn man, back off !!! Two years she wept for pain asked mercy from this man but in vain, she almost lost her mind and gave up her soul... Spare her, back off !!! Caught between the crossfire of ravaging flame of bonfire heat, Burnt her skin like hell... Back off !!! He tried to get up, moved forward, I have to trigger the gun, I said, "Come on, and you'll be gone!" Back off !!! And bullet is heard, ripping his left leg, fell down to the floor, he cried and beg "Daughter, I love you so much, don't let her do this! help me, tell her back off please!" Bull****! I almost killed the man! Yes, why not? I can do it! But I controlled, called backups I will never back off to this fight! I saw her weep loudly, her life was a mess Damn to this vulture who eats his own flesh! He deserve a bullet on his head, don't you think? Ruining his daughter's life, he must be thrown in hell! Flesh to flesh, blood to blood Is it easy to back off and just let this pass? No way! How dare anyone would say: Back off, Carole, stop and never look back! No, no, no, no, no! He must pay his crime, I swear he must die! But I am not a killer, nor a hunter but I would lie, If I don't admit I wanted him to burn in hell and die! Then I turned my back, let them get him Turned him over, trembling with anger He must be thrown into steel bars let him pay what he has done, for years... Steel bars, keep this man! Inner Whispers (dedicated to the victims of sex slavery and incest)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/1/2014 9:17:00 AM
Great narrative! Delicate topic/s tackled extremely well. Well done! // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/11/2014 4:13:00 AM
Hi Carole! doing fine...glad to see you around again:)
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Inner Whispers
Date: 5/11/2014 3:24:00 AM
thanks for the review, dear Paul! How are you?
Date: 5/1/2014 8:18:00 AM
WOW~~~ well done, Carole!!! It's like I'm watching Angelina's Wanted Scenes... Awesome masterpiece... !!! :O)) this one deserves an Oscar's... ^_^
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Inner Whispers
Date: 5/11/2014 3:24:00 AM
wow...receiving this comment from a multi-win poetess is an honor! Thanks, kabayan! The man deserves to rot in jail.

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