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July 6, 2024, placed 2nd in Joseph May's Double Double Words to Bubble 2 Contest

 
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STEAMY SUMMER



Sweat-drenched heat victims crank up the AC’s.
Temperate weather has bid us adieu.
Energy is sapped; for some, optimism grows dim.
Alleviation follows the occasional rainstorm.
Many rely on swimming pools for brief respite.
Yesterday was hot; today will be a record-breaker.
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May Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 5:42 AM
Very nicely done Janice, Congrats on your win
Canerdy Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 2:29 PM
Joseph, thanks so much for sponsoring and for my win! Janice
Goldsmith Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 1:13 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Double Acrostic write again.  Have a great day/weekend..............
Canerdy Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 2:06 PM
Thanks so much, Paula. Janice
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 9:12 AM
Yikes. What a summer. Some can really get bad. Well done, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
July 4, 2024 at 7:33 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice
Bell Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 8:59 AM
Extreme weather. Extreme weather in Britain is me going through the car wash and having to pay for the privilege. I take it Mississippi is hot, hot.
Canerdy Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 9:08 PM
Heat indexes in the triple digits! Thanks, Paul. Janice
Allison Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 3:07 AM
Janice this is a fabulous acrostic for the contest - am so glad we dont get extreme temperatures on our little island, love the line about energy being sapped - happens to me when we go abroad on holiday and i am not a lover of too much sun/ heat. hugs jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 5:56 AM
Thanks a million, Jan! The high here in Mississippi today is 98~~heat index in triple digits. Janice
Turner Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 5:34 PM
Sounds just like summer in the south, Janice. I'm one who loves the heat. I hope all is well with you:)
Canerdy Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 9:36 PM
Good to hear from you. If you love heat, you'd be in Heaven in Mississippi! Janice
Goldsmith Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 9:43 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun Acrostic write. I found it took extra time/thought to do this one... "Good Luck"  Enjoy your day as you write it away.......................
Canerdy Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 11:02 AM
This one took a while. It doesn't flow very smoothly! I'm glad you liked it, Paula. THANKS. Janice
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