steaming breath

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withheld in winter's breath is the steam of spring curled up to be expelled

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/26/2025 10:10:00 AM

Delightful, John ~ beautiful

John Anderson
Date: 5/26/2025 10:12:00 AM

Wow thanks very much - love your work!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/26/2025 2:30:00 AM

- The beauty of spring, thank you for this beautiful picture, John :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest -:) - hugs

John Anderson
Date: 5/26/2025 10:13:00 AM

Thanks for your contests which I enjoy entering. Nice to get the feedback. Cheers and All the Best

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2025 9:49:00 PM

Oooh. This is very nice, John

John Anderson
Date: 5/25/2025 10:00:00 PM

Thanks very much for your kind thoughts. Cheers and Best Wishes

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/9/2025 5:33:00 PM

A very cool write!