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Steam Train Ride

The whistle blows, the chugging starts - A steam train ride in France - For those who like to try things From the past, this is your chance. Since when it’s time to turn around, The leading car’s unlatched And driven to a turntable Before it’s reattached. The locomotive then gets cranked, By hand! one circle ‘round. The engineer next drives to where The once-caboose is found. The train is reconnected And goes back the way it came, Passing trees and giant rock formations, Looking all the same. An aqueduct appears and there’s An eagle in the sky, But what impresses most on board As we go zipping by Is a trio by the river, Down below and quickly viewed, Being very French, relaxing Near the water, in the nude.

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Date: 7/15/2024 1:59:00 AM
I enjoyed this poem, Ilene, and it took me back many years when I first went to Italy and we choked on smoke that filled the carriage when the train was going through a tunnel (I bet I still have soot in my lungs lol). ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 7/14/2024 7:16:00 PM
Cute ending to another inventive write, Ilene. Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 7/14/2024 6:19:00 AM
Haha bet you didn’t expect that Ilene!! Fun poem with a funny ending!! Debx
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Date: 7/14/2024 6:02:00 AM
A surprise ending for sure. After reading your wonderful poem, the train will be full of tourists and photographers hoping to see (nature) at its best.
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Date: 7/14/2024 5:30:00 AM
you sure made me smile about the skinny dippers lol - we have a wonderful steam railway here on the Island - you should pop across the channel and visit us - Ive just made fruit scones and a lemon tart for our visitor this afternoon lol:-) hugs jan xx
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