Steam

Empty chicken soup Twirling like a hula hoop Stirring in my soup

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John Freeman

Date: 3/21/2010 8:07:00 PM

Congratulations Robb, on your placement. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2010 11:03:00 AM

Cute image you create here! congratulations, Robb. Luv, andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/20/2010 8:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your success in the contest, Robb. This was a clever approach to the challenge! Love, Carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/20/2010 5:32:00 AM

Congratulations Robb, on your success in my contest with this clever senryu. Thank you for entering. Smiles, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2010 10:13:00 AM

Well the weekend is upon us and I am trying to get as many poems read as possible today as I will be gone most of the weekend from the Soup. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Robb. Love, Carol