Steam

Empty chicken soup
Twirling like a hula hoop
  Stirring in my soup
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Freeman Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 8:07 PM
Congratulations Robb, on your placement. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Cute image you create here! congratulations, Robb. Luv, andrea
Devonshire Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 8:07 AM
Congratulations on your success in the contest, Robb. This was a clever approach to the challenge! Love, Carolyn
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 5:32 AM
Congratulations Robb, on your success in my contest with this clever senryu. Thank you for entering. Smiles, Dane Ann
Brown Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 10:13 AM
Well the weekend is upon us and I am trying to get as many poems read as possible today as I will be gone most of the weekend from the Soup. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Robb. Love, Carol
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