Stealcian

I do not underestimate you.
My naive nature has shielded my fear...
Turn around.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 15, 2010 at 7:20 PM
I agree with Chris. It's nice to see a senryu that has the quality of the form without adhering to rigid syllable counts. Nice work, Maggie. Best wishes, Carolyn
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