Steadfast

Volcanic flame made Rocks- battered by ocean waves Steadfast be their name
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Ashley Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 8:50 PM
A fabulous haiku Maria with fantastic imagery and deep meaning. Love the last line. Such artistry and intelligence portrayed in your write. Excellent and enjoyed!!
Callus Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Volcanic rock has passed the test of endurance, Maria...no wonder it stays steadfast! Of course, I also see this metaphorically...a strong relationship based on true and passionate love can withstand life's ordeals. ~ Regards // paul
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 6:07 PM
Maria, I can picture all the action in my imagination I like this poem.
Williams Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 7:26 AM
Thanks so much Darlene, I really appreciate your visit and lovely comment...Maria
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 3:50 AM
- This was impressive, well done Maria - ( I love Haiku poems ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 6:52 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise Hugs back
White Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 12:08 AM
Another extremely strong haiku. That last line is simply a beaut. :)
Williams Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 12:33 AM
Thank you so much Darren
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