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Volcanic flame made Rocks- battered by ocean waves Steadfast be their name

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Date: 11/4/2017 8:50:00 PM
A fabulous haiku Maria with fantastic imagery and deep meaning. Love the last line. Such artistry and intelligence portrayed in your write. Excellent and enjoyed!!
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Date: 6/10/2017 8:16:00 AM
Volcanic rock has passed the test of endurance, Maria...no wonder it stays steadfast! Of course, I also see this metaphorically...a strong relationship based on true and passionate love can withstand life's ordeals. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 6/5/2017 6:07:00 PM
Maria, I can picture all the action in my imagination I like this poem.
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Date: 6/11/2017 7:26:00 AM
Thanks so much Darlene, I really appreciate your visit and lovely comment...Maria
Date: 3/17/2017 3:50:00 AM
- This was impressive, well done Maria - ( I love Haiku poems ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/27/2017 6:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise Hugs back
Date: 3/17/2017 12:08:00 AM
Another extremely strong haiku. That last line is simply a beaut. :)
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Date: 3/17/2017 12:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Darren

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