Rollo West Poet I do not know?

Staying Close

When I wrap my arms around you
Can you feel my fingers grasping the fabric of your clothes
You whisper, “you embrace me like I am going to blow away”.
But  the fabric I have so tightly grasped, was not to keep you here
But to go with you, when you departed

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Andrew John December 6, 2012 at 3:42 AM Nice thought. The piece bends the thought process while one's reading, an oft-used device but one that never loses its ability to delight. Rollo West December 6, 2012 at 6:07 PM Hi Andrew, thank you for stopping by and your great comment. Rollo

Richard Lamoureux December 1, 2012 at 1:31 PM I see you are a true romantic. Another excellent piece. Rollo West December 6, 2012 at 6:07 PM Hi Richard, thank you so much for your great comment. Rollo

Lucilla Carrillo November 16, 2012 at 2:32 PM Rollo; this is very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing it with us. Lucilla Rollo West November 16, 2012 at 7:12 PM Hi Lucilla thank you so very much for stopping by. Rollo