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(yalto form)

Date written: 07/24/2022

Stay With Me


stay with me...

until the sun 
     goes down 
          even if hours 
                burn to a cinder, 
                     stay with me!

let's dance 
     in the rain 
          and make 
               moments sweet 
                     i implore...

don't depart too soon!
     not when the day is still 
           young...
                this is all I ask.
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Logan Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 5:23 PM
Your thoughts are so very romantic, Edward. I'm sending soup mail for you.
Ibeh Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 2:19 PM
Thank you very much, Jenna:-) I appreciate the soupmail!
Zahid Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 3:43 AM
This is a sweet love poem... Enjoyed it. Blessings Edward
Ibeh Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 10:30 AM
Thank you so much, Paghunda:-)
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