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Stay With Me

stay with me... until the sun goes down even if hours burn to a cinder, stay with me! let's dance in the rain and make moments sweet i implore... don't depart too soon! not when the day is still young... this is all I ask. (yalto) "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly. Lines 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables Date written: 07/24/2022

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Date: 7/28/2022 5:23:00 PM
Your thoughts are so very romantic, Edward. I'm sending soup mail for you.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2022 2:19:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jenna:-) I appreciate the soupmail!
Date: 7/26/2022 3:43:00 AM
This is a sweet love poem... Enjoyed it. Blessings Edward
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/26/2022 10:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, Paghunda:-)

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