Stay Strong Live Long

Age is like a derelict house
That needs much repairing
The aged get out of breath
The house needs to let some air in
Tummies often rumble
Bricks and mortar start to crumble
Oldies often lose a tooth
Older houses have no roof
Old men worry about their bald pate
House owners worry about creaking gate
Leaking bladder, dripping faucet
Broken sash cord, too tight corset
The house is sinking fast
How long can the aged last
Building and people both decay
It's the strongest ones that stay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Theraven Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 12:59 PM
Shirley, I love your poem's strength in Rhyme. 'How long can the aged last Building and people both decay It's the strongest ones that stay'. Very nice to find this today. Hope you and yours have a nice week-end. -Richard
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November 23, 2019 at 7:10 PM
Thank you for your kind comment. Much appreciated. I find Rhyme easier to write than free verse. The poems on Poetry Soup in free verse always seems to be more Poetic to me Hope you and your family are having a nice weekend.....Shirley
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