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Stay Longer, Spring

Although near June casts its heated upswing
Vibrant weaves of blooms adorn field's aisle ...
‘Oh,  let  me relish five more days  of spring’
Where tulips and dogwoods pose to beguile!



Arbitrium Divisa Contest of Gregory R. Barden
Submitted   5/26/2019
Taken from the poem ' Five More Days ' ( 5/6/2019)
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~ Not entered in a previous contest~

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2019

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/13/2019 5:49:00 PM so wonderful this is, Nette . BIG congrats on a great win. Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 6/13/2019 1:42:00 PM Beautifully conceived; beautifully rhymed. Congrats on a #2 Trophy in Greg's contest. His standards, as we all know, are the highest of the high. Way to go, nette! Warm wishes, Gershon Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 6/13/2019 9:45:00 AM Sweet, nette. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Kelly Deschler Date: 6/7/2019 11:00:00 PM There is much beauty to be found in spring, and indeed we must relish it while we can... And I have found just as much joy in reading this delightful little poem... Beautifully penned Nette! Login to Reply

Lindsay Laurie Date: 5/27/2019 10:42:00 PM Hello nette … nicely written nette. We are about to make winter by the calendar but it has already struck; brrr - thanks nette - Lindsay Login to Reply

Kevin Shaw Date: 5/27/2019 3:37:00 PM Oh Nette what wonderful imagery, Keats, Wordsworth eat your heart out, regards, Kevin xx Login to Reply

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 5/27/2019 3:23:00 PM Nice one Nette, flows very well! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/27/2019 12:50:00 PM - The time runs out ... a beautiful wish, Nette :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 5/27/2019 12:05:00 PM I hear the longing for few more days of spring..great imagery, Nette. Login to Reply