Stay

Golden moments, their precious hues, Tarnish and fade into the blues... Nothing gold can stay, they say. Why, must these things pass away? Was happiness not meant to see? What a wonderful world that would be; Of flowers that should not wilt, With the family that was built. If I could, I would have my way... And, everything gold would stay. (Inspired by Robert Frost's poem, 'Nothing Gold Can Stay')

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Christina Bowring

Date: 5/10/2023 3:54:00 PM

Really enjoyed reading your poem so beautifully penned. Thank you

Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/11/2023 8:04:00 AM

Thank you so much, Christina... I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 3/26/2023 7:09:00 AM

I hate artificial flowers but this says it all and very beautifully. Some do not know what poetry is but you do.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/12/2023 7:40:00 AM

Thank you so much, John.

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/19/2023 1:15:00 AM

It does nit stay Kelly.' For it is ahead of us Awaiting in the eternal embrace of the Father.' I use that descriptive (as I beleive it denotes) Power rather than gender. ' and a mindset more Decsisive than (man or woman can assimlate) Or aspire to.' So in light of this breakdown I See no benefit in altering Gods descriptive from The mascline..Its the closest we can get to A true likeness.'

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/10/2023 7:06:00 AM

Maybe all of those things we lose in life will be there, just waiting for us, after life :)

John Gondolf

Date: 3/18/2023 4:15:00 AM

A world where flowers never wilt, what a beautiful thought, Kelly.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/9/2023 5:14:00 PM

Thank you, John

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/8/2023 9:38:00 AM

A wonderful write. I Love It. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/9/2023 5:13:00 PM

Thank you for reading, Paula :)

Len Gasun

Date: 3/4/2023 3:39:00 AM

Outstanding poety as always my dear friend Kelly. I love this a lot. The ending is great, If I could i would have my way, and everything gold will stay. To my fave dear. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your golden pen. Hugs

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/9/2023 5:11:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Len :) Sending hugs :)

Aysha Nuwas

Date: 2/23/2023 9:10:00 PM

Beautiful poetry , I loved reading this gem!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/8/2023 4:50:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Aysha :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/23/2023 5:34:00 AM

Kelly, those first two lines are very poetic and deep. Good luck! I enjoyed the read this morning.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/5/2023 8:11:00 AM

Thank you so much, Daniel... I'm glad you enjoyed this one :)