Starving Artist Takes the Stardust

  	       Baby love infatuation
                 did not become her station
               Her parents held higher expectations

               To a rising star she’d marry
                  on romantic love, she’d not tarry
                Yet her primal feelings she could not bury

                From college she brought home a starving artist
                   Who, after two days of trying his hardest
                first emptied the fridge 
                            ~ then parted with the stardust
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Crandall Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 7:16 PM
What was in the frig? This one has me thinking about food. ~ Juan Trackmond (hmm, haven't quite got the hang of this)
Wolf Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 10:02 PM
Then,... food it is.
Edmonds  Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 2:16 AM
He was a loser, then perhaps not… Beryl
Wolf Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 10:02 PM
An in-betweener, it looks like...
Greenhough Avatar
April 23, 2026 at 9:22 PM
It sounds like it's good news. After all, he left. I like this poem.
Wolf Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 10:03 PM
Hope it likes you too, Hilda. Peace, Gershon
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