Starstruck Tricube

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Oliver Mckeithan's Tricube Challenge...24 Jul 25

high above plumes of trees night stars glint--- blushing soft beams caress dazzling fields charmed by streaks children yawn... "dream, goodnight."

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Lyric Man

Date: 7/26/2025 8:33:00 AM

Nette, good poets create vivid pictures; great poets take those pictures and create a lived-in experience. You, dear friend, are a great poet. You create memories in mind and heart so lifelike that they ignite the senses and trick the brain of the reader into believing that they were there. I saw it with my own eyes, felt the tough, breathed in the fragrance. Even here in this little, lullaby beauty, I’m there!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/25/2025 12:11:00 PM

What a creative/fun "Starstruck Tricube" write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day/weekend writing away..........

Dr. Vandana Sharma

Date: 7/25/2025 7:23:00 AM

Atmosphere is set for a sweet ,calming, lovely night!

Sara Baker

Date: 7/24/2025 5:31:00 PM

such a captivating poem...it left me content. Well penned, hugs, Sara