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Oliver Mckeithan's Tricube Challenge...24 Jul 25

Starstruck Tricube

high above plumes of trees night stars glint--- blushing soft beams caress dazzling fields charmed by streaks children yawn... "dream, goodnight."
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 10:21 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun "Starstruck Tricube" write again. Have a blessed day with your win.............
Hind Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 9:20 PM
Very pretty!
Mckeithan Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 12:31 PM
Congrats on your placement in my contest Nette. Your imagery used here is excellent
Man Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 8:33 AM
Nette, good poets create vivid pictures; great poets take those pictures and create a lived-in experience. You, dear friend, are a great poet. You create memories in mind and heart so lifelike that they ignite the senses and trick the brain of the reader into believing that they were there. I saw it with my own eyes, felt the tough, breathed in the fragrance. Even here in this little, lullaby beauty, I’m there!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 12:11 PM
What a creative/fun "Starstruck Tricube" write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day/weekend writing away..........
Sharma Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 7:23 AM
Atmosphere is set for a sweet ,calming, lovely night!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 5:31 PM
such a captivating poem...it left me content. Well penned, hugs, Sara
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