Starstruck Stars?

I have asked myself time and time again....

If I could write the most beautiful of words

Within the most alluring and colorful of ways

The pinnacles of splendid and eloquently written verse

Amid the highest echelons of majestical wonders

Ever beheld, beyond the histories of all mankind

Melting the hardest of hearts, or endearing the most tender of eyes

Having the entire world, flocking gleefully about my feet

An endless sea of souls, falling enchantingly in love with me....

What would it mean? And what would it be?

Could it fill the depths of something deeper inside?

Even if through my words I could hold them all

Within the very palms of my hands

What would survive? And what would die? I have thought

When the sun finally sets upon this glittering life

And the essence of whom I was, had taken its final breath?

If, nothing in which I had ever written or spoke

Had ever painted the picture or the portrait, of the everlastings

Paradise, of paragons perfection, or hades' abysmal sorrows....

Where then would be my reward, I considered

And in what joys, if I were to find

That all of my beauties and all of my wonders, my words

Were within the end, ultimately, all but amiss?

No! I covet not the things of this place....

Nor do I admire, not truly, the faithless ones

Even if their words were the most majestical ever spoken?

If the entire world flocked about their feet, I would not

For I have seen and I have known--"Know!"

That there is so much more, beyond this place and beyond this life

So much more, that I would never trade it, for my eternal soul!

Not even for a moment, inside of a moments, glittering world

............................Of.........................

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                  Starstruck Stars?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 7/27/2009 7:28:00 AM
John you can'melt the hardest of hearts'and 'endure the most tender of eyes'-you can do it through your words and love verses,'What would survive and what would die'/good question,warm feelings and emotions starstrucking the stars--you do--another deep write touchin hearts and souls John--awesome write--charma
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Date: 11/12/2008 7:22:00 PM
And you are a star John! Wonderful write and believe me it had a great impact o'er my heart and in my eyes:) Words are things sustaining the lives. For me as far as my words comfort me, I dont have any desires and when they deal with perfection in other's eyes, it feels great. So many mixed feelings have been put here. A beautiful way to deliver feelings John! I felt your true essence here. Love to you always, Chitra
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Date: 11/12/2008 3:13:00 PM
so true, and they are just like us, some worse off than we are, beautiful write thanks for your comments take care
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Date: 11/12/2008 2:18:00 AM
John Heaven is precious and salvation is the greatest gift or reward for our works and it was given free based on love by Our heavenly father. He can only give the greatest gift of all. Their is no greater accalade then that. I will give you one this is wonderful and true and inspiring. God bless you and yours love Michael Torres.....
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