Star-struck

  
    Watching the Winter Olympics from afar
       I wish I were an ice-skating star

    To soar and twirl, leap up to the sky ~
      in empty indoor rinks in July
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Sangster - K Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 8:52 AM
We can always dream... Enjoyed reading your Star-struck Gershon :-D
Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 6:46 PM
That would be fun. If we had strength, empty rinks and the talent to reach the stars!
Buehler Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 2:28 PM
Way to go, Gershon! Reach for the stars! A cool poem. :D
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 12:15 PM
Hello Gershon , i can vision you doing the leaps and twirlsto the sky. Hyou did Great!! Enjoy your day myfriend. /Darlene/
Read Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 10:38 AM
Hi Gershon ice hockey is more your game, all that leaping and twirling is definitely not you.
Bauer Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 9:09 AM
nice one, gershon! that's my favorite olympic sport to watch ...
Goldsmith Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 8:45 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun write. In hot July, I bet the cool ice rink feels good. Can we get a picture with you skating??? Please??? Have a blessed day writing away.............
M  Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 7:19 AM
BB l see you more as a Ballerina to be honest!! Nice poem.....Deb x
Lawless Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 6:21 AM
C'mon Gershon, just plug in the air conditioner and stand on one leg.....
Cunningham Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 11:01 PM
With two left feet I've got no chance lol. Tom
Tor Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 10:21 PM
That would be great Gershon to do that in July. Thanks for sharing.
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