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Stars You Say

Stars twinkling in the sky In the heavens passing us by Star fish in the ocean below crawling on the floor nice and slow Stars painted on the face all the make up in it's place Stars dancing on ice skating and doing a splice Dancing with the stars dance steps to musical bars Running in to the wall or door And you see stars and the floor Your paper has been aced A star on the corner is placed A grandson's favorite song by far Twinkle Twinkle little star. 5/3/13

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Gerald Kithinji

Date: 10/26/2013 3:30:00 AM

I remember the song, too; thanks for hitting the right cord!

John Posey

Date: 6/30/2013 7:21:00 PM

There is a lot to like in this creative entry. You hit the right spots with this one... Love ya ... Jake

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/15/2013 1:56:00 AM

This is very cute ;}

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/30/2013 4:27:00 AM

you have themed Stars so well here I love it gets a 7 from me Linda

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/30/2013 2:02:00 AM

Loved this little sparkeler Phyllis..Real down to earth stardom..'

Jack Horne

Date: 5/5/2013 3:35:00 PM

love this, Phyll - I loved the seeing stars part especially, lol. Hope you are all doing well x

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/4/2013 5:19:00 AM

Ahhh!!!Enjoyed this one..If for a contest, reads like winning material to me..So you live out where the buffalo roam and the deer and antelope play..There are places out there where there are wide open land..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2013 11:57:00 PM

I love the way you hit almost every aspect of stars in this sweet twinkling succinct poem. LOVE it, Phyllis and thanks so much for seeing so many of my poems tonight. Luv, andrea

Donna Jones

Date: 5/3/2013 9:08:00 PM

Your poem shines star bright....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/3/2013 8:43:00 PM

I love your poem... LInda