Stars You Say

Stars twinkling in the sky
In the heavens passing us by

Star fish in the ocean below
crawling on the floor nice and slow

Stars painted on the face
all the make up in it's place

Stars dancing on ice
skating and doing a splice

Dancing with the stars
dance steps to musical bars

Running in to the wall or door
And you see stars and the floor

Your paper has been aced
A star on the corner is placed

A grandson's favorite song by far
Twinkle Twinkle little star.

5/3/13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kithinji Avatar
October 26, 2013 at 3:30 AM
I remember the song, too; thanks for hitting the right cord!
Posey Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 7:21 PM
There is a lot to like in this creative entry. You hit the right spots with this one... Love ya ... Jake
Duncan Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 1:56 AM
This is very cute ;}
Hamilton Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 4:27 AM
you have themed Stars so well here I love it gets a 7 from me Linda
Maverick Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 2:02 AM
Loved this little sparkeler Phyllis..Real down to earth stardom..'
Horne Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 3:35 PM
love this, Phyll - I loved the seeing stars part especially, lol. Hope you are all doing well x
Kendrick Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 5:19 AM
Ahhh!!!Enjoyed this one..If for a contest, reads like winning material to me..So you live out where the buffalo roam and the deer and antelope play..There are places out there where there are wide open land..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 11:57 PM
I love the way you hit almost every aspect of stars in this sweet twinkling succinct poem. LOVE it, Phyllis and thanks so much for seeing so many of my poems tonight. Luv, andrea
Jones Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 9:08 PM
Your poem shines star bright....
A   Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 8:43 PM
I love your poem... LInda
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