Stars Will Falll

Stars will fall like rain caught on the tip 
of my tongue which brightens my soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Croft Avatar
March 13, 2026 at 3:51 AM
Very nice monoku
Buck Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 7:57 PM
Heather: You've wrapped up a lot in a small package. Good job. I'm just a simple 'rhymer' but enjoy reading these other "types" as much, I just can't write them. :o) When you wrote this did you ever imagine over 1850 folks would read your work by April 9 on the soup ? Keep them coming. oldbuck
Brearley Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 10:00 PM
Amazing I am just getting caught up I'm on vacay.
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 5:08 AM
- Oh, beautiful line Heather - Warm welcome to the Poetry Soup :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Brearley Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 5:12 AM
Thank you! Sunshine Smile! Its fun writing poetry for sure. I hope to explore all the different styles.
White Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 1:45 AM
Wonderful monoku, with great imagery there. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
Brearley Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 3:35 AM
Thank you very much Darren
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