Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Stars That Passed

I wonder if you remember the good times...
A sunlit morning with words and rhymes...
Coffee and juice with strawberries served...
A morning treat and much loved deserved...
Our getaways have drifted to dust....
A past once so clear is tattered with rust....
Memories some good and some bad...
Hope when you think of me the feelings are not sad...
We were two stars that collided that were way to bright...
But there will always be a corner of my heart that still
holds you tight...

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Poet Destroyer A December 10, 2012 at 9:57 PM a lucky women who holds your heart... i do not think many sad thoughts would run across her mind while thinking of you...pd

Sharon Tideswell August 29, 2010 at 5:35 AM Bittersweet and beautifully written Michael. I think we all save a corner of our hearts for a certain star ~ Sharon :)

Andrea Dietrich August 28, 2010 at 8:23 PM Old romance is so bittersweet, Michael and you depicted that well. LUv,Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 28, 2010 at 5:19 PM Alluring and romantic Michael... such elegant opening lines... sweet and romantic .. with luv.. appreciate your kind comments today.. my son is doing so much better to from all the prayers offered up... appreciate..luv..

Poet Destroyer A August 28, 2010 at 3:36 PM hummm ! Michale, This sounds romantic and sad at the same time,,very delicious and heart pounding memories if you ask me. Just the missing part is heart felt, loved and enjoyed,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire August 28, 2010 at 10:02 AM We should never forget those we once held dear, Michael. As Catie said, "I like your attitude!" And there are many times I remember those stars that passed through my life with great fondness. Love, Carolyn

De R August 28, 2010 at 9:16 AM Wonderful memories about your past love...I often think about my ex and the good times...just as Wilma said, everything happens for a reason. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't. Emily

Wilma Neels August 28, 2010 at 8:48 AM I always think that people meet for a reason even when it doesn't work out, sometimes that person is exactly what you needed at that particular time in your life.. Learned that the hard way lol.. Enjoyed this write Michael.. Great memories, luv W