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Stars Of Clarity

A purplish black dark sky night Brushed the reddish moon with white The sun has painted the sky with orangish hues And tinted the stars of clarity with greenish blues The yellowish new sun just minutes old Has gild the moon a silverish gold When all the brownish leaves turned gray It rose a beautiful pinkish day

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/5/2023 4:55:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely/colorful write again. Have a wonderful day with your win...............

Silent One

Date: 12/4/2023 2:38:00 PM

Love the colours.. congratulations on your placement

Ink Empress

Date: 12/4/2023 2:58:00 AM

Ah charles this is so stunning, every line in this just is so well articulated and delivered with descriptive diction. The way you’ve painted imagery throughout this is so captivating with sublime rhymes and flow. I especially love “ Has gild the moon a silverish gold When all the brownish leaves turned gray It rose a beautiful pinkish day“ just wow! Amazing! I loved it, so fitting for the prompt. Congratulations on your well deserved win, thank you for sharing

Charles Messina
Date: 12/4/2023 3:22:00 AM

Thank you so much for my wonderful placement, Ink. Thanks also for always being so supportive...much appreciated dear friend :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/22/2023 3:33:00 PM

outstanding entry for the contest, Charles. I appreciated all the color and the colorful images that captured the essence of the morning star. Well done, Sir and best wishes with the contest, Sara

Charles Messina
Date: 12/4/2023 3:23:00 AM

Thank you, Sara :)