Stars Of Clarity

A purplish black dark sky night 
Brushed the reddish moon with white 
The sun has painted the sky with orangish hues 
And tinted the stars of clarity with greenish blues 
The yellowish new sun just minutes old 
Has gild the moon a silverish gold 
When all the brownish leaves turned gray 
It rose a beautiful pinkish day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 4:55 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely/colorful write again. Have a wonderful day with your win...............
One Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 2:38 PM
Love the colours.. congratulations on your placement
Empress Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 2:58 AM
Ah charles this is so stunning, every line in this just is so well articulated and delivered with descriptive diction. The way you’ve painted imagery throughout this is so captivating with sublime rhymes and flow. I especially love “ Has gild the moon a silverish gold When all the brownish leaves turned gray It rose a beautiful pinkish day“ just wow! Amazing! I loved it, so fitting for the prompt. Congratulations on your well deserved win, thank you for sharing
Messina Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 3:22 AM
Thank you so much for my wonderful placement, Ink. Thanks also for always being so supportive...much appreciated dear friend :)
Ball Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 12:36 PM
Beautifully done Charles with so much color and great rhythm and rhyme. Loved it. God Bless, jb
Messina Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 3:23 AM
Thank you so much, Judy :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 9:53 AM
Shining with spectacular colors - clarity of night and day :)
Messina Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 3:24 AM
Thank you, Kim :)
Goldsmith Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 7:49 AM
A lovely/colorful write. Good Luck. We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Messina Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 3:24 AM
Thank you, Paula :)
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