Stars- Npm

two stars coruscate
inside a hole in the ground
rat's eyes from tunnel

Dec-26-2020
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Allison Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 3:07 PM
interesting haiku, good luck in the contest;-) happy new year:-) hugs jan xx
Downing  Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 8:42 AM
Fantastic haiku...
Sands Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 5:33 AM
Wow, this is a great Haiku Supraja ! Well done :)
Jayasankar Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 9:03 AM
Great imagery you captured if rats' eyes Supraja in these three lines. Hugs ~ Ani
Jayasankar Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 9:04 AM
***of rats' eyes
Pandit Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 4:57 AM
Very clever Supraja!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 12:47 AM
That's very original. ~~
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