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Stars Never Forget Our Dreams

I've dreamt dreams in my life till you forgotten who I am the smooth curves of my lips and roses in my hair. You've dreamt dreams in your life till I forgotten who you are the dimple of your smile and velvets of your heart. But stars never forget our dreams Stars never forgot your wet fingertips writing proposals on the sand Nor those kisses treaded softly as you lifted up my hand. So if the colour of the night gets dark and dusty blue If you ever think of me If I ever think of you Just close your eyes Remember ,there's the splendour of a star Still shows me where you are Remember,there's the splendour of a star Still shows you where I am It shows eternal Heartbeats Of a woman and a man.
Because Stars never forget our dreams...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/21/2023 6:56:00 PM
I had to go back and find this wonderful piece.
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Date: 5/13/2018 10:28:00 PM
He's still out there the stars can see More than memories but what could be Your melancholy turned to muse Drop forsaken there's still a fuse Light it up girl can you believe Between the lines a love meant to be Lonely sailor just off your shore He's returned heart aches for more And more and more and more He aches for more!
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Date: 12/21/2017 9:59:00 AM
Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one again. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 8/21/2017 2:55:00 PM
Stars and dreams, always a recipe for heart beats - beautiful write Charmaine, just loved it - Mike
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Date: 5/31/2017 6:46:00 PM
Oh so Lovely Charmaine !! Creative and beautiful :)
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Date: 5/29/2017 7:08:00 PM
Hi Charma, This is well written and dreamy. I found it to be sad, beautiful and hopeful. The scene you created with your skillful pen was breathtaking and captivating. The way you worked title in the last line was a great finish to this well written masterpiece. Although the rating feature is gone it's a 7+ from me as well a fav-)Alexis
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Date: 5/29/2017 2:28:00 AM
Excellent and beautifully penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it
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Date: 5/27/2017 12:09:00 PM
Charmaine... sigh... I hope there will be a star for me :)
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Date: 5/26/2017 5:08:00 PM
Hi Charmaine , this is a masterpiece , I enjoyed this write so much thanks for sharing such a beautiful write rate easy 7 and a favorite :)))
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Date: 5/26/2017 3:58:00 PM
What Richard said...and...I always have to fav your never ending talent. Lots Of Love, armand.
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Date: 5/25/2017 12:14:00 PM
This is an enchanting write Charmaine:) Amitiés
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Date: 5/25/2017 8:29:00 AM
You are unforgettable as is your writing!
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Date: 5/25/2017 7:48:00 AM
Beautiful...TAH
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Date: 5/24/2017 4:54:00 PM
A real joy to read Charmaine, I loved how you ended it, just lovely:-) and a fave!
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Date: 5/24/2017 2:44:00 PM
I absolutely love this one Charmaine. I would like to add to my favorites. Beautiful, comforting. So well written :)
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Date: 5/24/2017 2:42:00 PM
Charmaine, this is so enchantingly beautiful. That final line, wow, how I wish I had written that. You have illumined my mind with this wonderful poem of lost love but never forgetting, always knowing it was there. I loved this poem.
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Date: 5/24/2017 2:25:00 PM
Stars never forget dreams...how beautiful...I just posted about stars : )...fantabulous
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Date: 5/24/2017 2:28:00 PM
This was inspired by Jazz music. And an old comment on a poem of mine...I will read your poem sn..and thanks for reading.Much appreciated.

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