Tim Ryerson Poet Senryu

Stars In Your Eyes

heaven's ancient lights
dispatched billions of years past
glisten in your eyes

*Light travels at the speed of 186,000 miles per second
When we look up to the stars, we view light sent eons ago

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Hansteven Selfa January 5, 2016 at 9:09 AM A very lovely senryu :)

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2015 at 8:45 AM Just saw Ruben's comment. SO funny

Laura Breidenthal August 3, 2015 at 11:16 PM A lovely poem here! The stars are just remarkable. "heaven's ancient lights" indeed. It's always a pleasure reading your work. Always, Laura

Carrie Richards August 1, 2015 at 3:57 PM Ahh........you are indeed, a renaissance man.......romantic at heart !! Love it!

Gary Bateman July 28, 2015 at 2:04 PM Hello Tim!! A brilliant and fantastic Senryu write!! It's nice to know that we are already dated by quite a while when we look up at the Stars. A "7" for sure!! Cheers, Gary

Wilma Neels July 27, 2015 at 11:39 AM This is a beauty Tim ;) I love it! Hope you are having a good start to your week ;)

Kp Nunez July 24, 2015 at 12:34 PM Amazing fact and a brilliant senryu, Tim! :-)

Casarah Nance July 21, 2015 at 9:15 PM aww, that is pretty overwhelming and beautiful to think about! :)

Andrea Dietrich July 21, 2015 at 7:47 PM oh wow, I love this one, Tim. Hey, I saw the nice thing you said in a blog about me. Thanks so much, my friend.