Stars Have No Shadow

still there's dark somewhere
                                     let light fall over from head
                                         stars have no shadow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Horsman Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 5:07 PM
The light surely shine on your poetry BL
Lawless Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 4:46 PM
I love this one....the title drew me in and the senryu itself invited me to stay for a few more reads.
Devnath  Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 5:02 AM
Many thanks for your visit to my page and for your comment, my lovely new poet friend. Loved always,bl
Chircop Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 2:34 PM
An outstanding senryu!!
Devnath  Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 2:41 PM
Thanks my lovely poetess friend for stopping by here on my poem. Loved always,bl
Onclaud Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 1:57 PM
bless your stars..you glow with this one, bl... good job!..hugggs
Devnath  Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 2:01 PM
Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your visit. Loved always,bl
Andresen Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 1:52 PM
- It's because they shine so beautifully :) - Well written, dear friend Bl - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 2:02 PM
Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always,bl
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