Stars Falling

To catch a glimpse of a falling star It so shines for the finale and last time

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Michael Craig

Date: 7/8/2019 12:40:00 PM

Darlene, thanks for letting me know what form of poetry this is as I only know how to write Rhyme. But have been trying to branch out it was by total accident. But, know I think I have some kinda idea what monoku from is. Thanks for enlighten me. - Mike

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/7/2019 2:21:00 PM

Hello Michael Craig, this poem is a monoku form. You did very well. have a nice day my friend.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/26/2019 2:10:00 PM

It does indeed stir our feelings of wonderment as delivered in your poetic thought line! CayCay

Michael Craig
Date: 7/8/2019 12:46:00 PM

Hi CayCay, I haven't been writing much poetry lately. It was nice of you to commit I just wrote to entere a contest but did not place. A lady name Darlene De Beaulieu committed and said it was monoku form. I'm going to have to look that up. Nice to hear from you.