Stars Falling

To catch a glimpse
of a falling star
It so shines for 
the finale and last time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Craig Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 12:40 PM
Darlene, thanks for letting me know what form of poetry this is as I only know how to write Rhyme. But have been trying to branch out it was by total accident. But, know I think I have some kinda idea what monoku from is. Thanks for enlighten me. - Mike
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 2:21 PM
Hello Michael Craig, this poem is a monoku form. You did very well. have a nice day my friend.
Godwin Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 2:10 PM
It does indeed stir our feelings of wonderment as delivered in your poetic thought line! CayCay
Craig Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 12:46 PM
Hi CayCay, I haven't been writing much poetry lately. It was nice of you to commit I just wrote to entere a contest but did not place. A lady name Darlene De Beaulieu committed and said it was monoku form. I'm going to have to look that up. Nice to hear from you.
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