Star's Darling Moon

Star's darling Moon

You are my sweetest moon
In your arms wrap me soon 
I crave to be your star forever
For You are my greatest treasure
Poured you lots of love in my life's empty cask
Nothing more than your love I can to God ask
Our moments of togetherness in the sky's blue terrace
Your shine and scent on me spread with vivid grace
As you draw me close to you and hug me very tight
Calls for a Celestial celebration, angels dance with delight
Shower you kisses enchanting wet and warm all over 
Makes me  shine and twinkle more like a diamond tower
To all who view me glow I would love to make it clear
My shine and smile I owe to my loving moon so dear
Sweeps he with his charm and shine, my spots of darkness
Fills my barren craters with trust and heavenly sweetness
When you are near my moon life is so adorable
You disappear for a while, my life turns utterly miserable
Like Oasis in desert  your entry in my otherwise arid life
You quenched all my thirst and erased with ease all my strife!

©Anulaxmi Nayak,2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/5/2016 11:57:00 PM
O listen to the moon, it silently speaks the word with his light.. quench your thirst, you're in love.
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Anu Nayak
Date: 3/10/2016 12:17:00 AM
Dear Pashang Salehi, i appreciate your words and visit, thank you.....well....i will listen to the moon and its shine:).............love, Anu:)
Date: 2/25/2016 1:33:00 PM
Anu, thank you for sharing the beauty found in your pen. You have an enchanting way of expressing love to your moon who makes the best out of you. Whoever they may be, you graced your darling with so much romanced --attraction by light. One of my second favorites by you, the imagery and motion are outstanding. A perfect 10 poem in my book. Luv ~LINDA~
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Anu Nayak
Date: 3/3/2016 8:44:00 AM
dear Linda, thank you so very much dear for your visit to so many of my poems and for your words of inspiration:) you are too generous.....you filled me with joy and love with your lovely words sweet lady, thanks again...loads of love and hugs, Anu:)
Date: 10/31/2015 9:48:00 AM
Anu....reads like a cellestial prayer! Lovely and jasmine scented! jimbo
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Anu Nayak
Date: 3/3/2016 8:41:00 AM
Dear James, thank you so very much for your visit and words ....your comment has brought in the scent of inspiration! sorry for the delayed reply.... thank you so much .....made me happy....love, Anu:)
Date: 10/4/2015 7:55:00 PM
Such a heartfelt write for the love of your life, Anu. In the beloved's mind, love can indeed quench all one's thirst and erase all the strife's of life... Enjoyed! hugs!
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Anu Nayak
Date: 10/31/2015 9:12:00 AM
dear Kim, thank you so very much dear for your great words of appreciation.....thank you .....for your sweet comment and am very happy you enjoyed my write..... sorry for my delayed reply....was busy with my exam....loads of love and hugs, Anu:)
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