Stars

in twilight’s garden
lumened shoots from evening's soil…
          wildflowers blooming


    **<>**08 Apr 2016**<>**
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Merryman Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 8:02 PM
David, congrats on your placement in BW's contest! Blessings!
Capitano Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 10:12 AM
Gorgeous piece, David, haiku is one of my favourite forms. "lumened shoots from evening's soil"- love it!!!
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 9:50 PM
OH MY GOSH, you are a wonder to write something like this. I LOVE it.
Gazbowski Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 8:22 AM
Beautiful 3 liner David.
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