Stars

Morning stars so bright A gift from so far away That moment is gone

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Skat A

Date: 5/12/2015 1:10:00 PM

WILLOW.. ENJOYED THE HAIKU, love SKAT

Dan Helppi

Date: 11/2/2014 7:12:00 PM

Blink

Jan Allison

Date: 10/31/2014 11:36:00 AM

wonderful imagery - one moment in time then its gone Willow:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jasonpoet Boyd

Date: 10/31/2014 8:15:00 AM

A moment happens only once But the memory is relived over and over. Cherish the good memories Love

David Meade

Date: 10/31/2014 8:02:00 AM

The still quiet before the light . . . fleeting moments of joy and laughter. Loved the image and the poem and a great reminder to always enjoy the moment before it is gone. All the best.