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Stars

STARS
Observed
Lilliputian illuminations
Buttonholes
In God's heart
Expose fire:
Love's emanations.
Darkness revealing
Astral profusion
Golden lucent abundance
Daylight syncopates
Into sun.
© Faye Lanham Gibson, June 18, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/19/2014 2:01:00 AM
So many lovely metaphors to describe the stars!! lovely indeed, i very much like button holes of god;s heart. Best wishes......................
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Date: 6/18/2014 4:56:00 PM
Very nicely done.
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Faye Gibson
Date: 6/22/2014 2:32:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by and commenting.
Date: 6/18/2014 3:06:00 PM
WOW WOW WOW awesome! Good luck in the contest. hugs jan xxxx
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Date: 6/18/2014 3:04:00 PM
wow, now THIS Is good work. I predict a top win!!
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Faye Gibson
Date: 6/22/2014 2:31:00 PM
Thank you, dear Andrea...it is nothing like the first draft. Lol!