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Stars

Stars Luminous, lovely Twinkling, travelling, towering Jumbo jewels of the Sky.

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/3/2013 4:49:00 PM

very good love it congrats on feature Shadow x smiles (7)

Skat A

Date: 5/9/2013 9:45:00 PM

Dhal, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"

Chate Dante

Date: 5/7/2013 8:04:00 AM

nice... :-)

David De La Croes

Date: 5/7/2013 6:31:00 AM

Welcome, Dhal, and thank you for a delightful poem! David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/7/2013 6:23:00 AM

Very descriptive work using the Cinquain..Enjoyed reading..Sara