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Stars

Stars
Luminous, lovely
Twinkling, travelling, 
towering
Jumbo jewels of the
Sky.

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Shadow Hamilton

August 3, 2013 at 4:49 PM

very good love it congrats on feature Shadow x smiles (7)

Skat A

May 9, 2013 at 9:45 PM

Dhal, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"