Stars

Stars twinkle bright,
like diamonds in the sky,
holding you captive.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 14, 2011 at 11:42 AM
attention they do take, such a beauty,, enjoyed this haiku,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 7:32 AM
They sure can hold you captive on certain glorious nights, Cory. A good topic for haiku. Luv, Andrea
Greenlee Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 7:12 AM
Intense Cory.Love your expression in this poem.Keep it up!You have soul,I love that.Thanks for stopping in and reading some of my poetry.Have a wonderful,uplifting day sweets....Kacey
Mills Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 3:53 PM
awesome poem. I invite for you to read my poem Sky Bling. Thanks for commenting on my poems. Susan
Horne Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 12:34 PM
Yes, indeed, Cory. Quite mesmerising, aren't they? Thanks for your kind words, but I was writing about a colleague's kidney stones : )
Clark Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 8:15 AM
I like this captivating poem
Mehta Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 7:06 AM
Nice visual created with images, cory
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