Stars

Individually they shine alone
within the night they are whole
never alone
breath deep and behold
we are like the stars 
together and whole
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 25, 2010 at 8:15 AM
Beautiful comparison...people as stars..."together and hole"...loved your idea! Kisses, Emily
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June 24, 2010 at 10:01 PM
wow, perfectly said,, I never thought it to be like that but this was awesome!!,,, P.D.
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