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Stars

Individually they shine alone within the night they are whole never alone breath deep and behold we are like the stars together and whole

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/25/2010 8:15:00 AM
Beautiful comparison...people as stars..."together and hole"...loved your idea! Kisses, Emily
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Date: 6/24/2010 10:01:00 PM
wow, perfectly said,, I never thought it to be like that but this was awesome!!,,, P.D.
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