"stars"

" I'm counting on the stars tonight
   just to make things right
  You're in my heart you see
 a snowflake from the sky to me
 A place you bring me to
 where dreams all come true
 Hand and hand we'll walk
  from the light to the dark
       what I feel is true
  no one can touch me and you
 Don't let the curtain come down
  my love is real with no bounds"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Minardi Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 8:44 AM
Featured poem? Woww, another great writing.
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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 PM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on Poetry Soup home page this week, you are such a great talent. Please keep your poetry pen dancing to the lyrics of your heart. Be great and enjoy the honor. Have a lovely week. Love, Adeleke
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July 12, 2010 at 8:49 PM
Congrats to the White Knight for your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a charmer to share with us all.. with luv..
Hales Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 4:11 PM
This is just another delight from a fine poet ..love it once again x sarah x
Brown Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 9:58 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Michael. Love, Carol
Smith Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 7:40 AM
aw i cant believe i am your first comment on this one! i loved it i thought it was very sweet! =) jo
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