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Starry Night

his gaze -
starry night sky's
soft rays.

her face
caught the night light,
such grace!

hearts tossed,
perched on the stars -
words lost ....

hija de la luna
11.29.14
for nette onclaud's "whispers of a muse" contest

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John Fleming

Date: 11/9/2015 2:29:00 PM

This is a lovely muse...Elegant and graceful. Well penned - Best regards! :) john

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/21/2015 3:11:00 AM

Nicely done ;)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/22/2015 4:55:00 AM

Another piece of magic.

Hija De La Luna
Date: 2/23/2015 6:43:00 AM

Thank you, Scott!

John Fleming

Date: 12/28/2014 4:54:00 AM

A charming little write, Hija. Cheers! :-) john.

Hija De La Luna
Date: 1/29/2015 10:08:00 PM

Thank you, John!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/13/2014 3:38:00 AM

his gaze - starry night sky's soft rays. really soft like winter dream... effect of calm hija. I am ThankfulXXXXX rajat

Hija De La Luna
Date: 12/13/2014 6:56:00 AM

thanks for the visit, Rajat, and leaving a comment! :))

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/8/2014 9:05:00 AM

Oh, Wow...perched on the stars...such romantic and beautiful imagery, Hija! Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda

Hija De La Luna
Date: 12/12/2014 10:33:00 PM

thank you, Rhonda! hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2014 7:03:00 PM

oooh, words lost. LOVE that!!! Congrats, hija de la luna. SHINE ON.

Hija De La Luna
Date: 12/4/2014 10:25:00 PM

ooh, Andrea, you made me smile with your congrats :)) thank you

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/4/2014 12:15:00 PM

Simply beautiful. I enjoyed this. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina

Hija De La Luna
Date: 12/4/2014 5:20:00 PM

so glad you enjoyed this, Regina! God bless you, too! Love and light!

Kp Nunez

Date: 12/4/2014 7:25:00 AM

Breathtakingly sweet, this poem is not only romantic, it also inspires this reader to write something in response to the muse' calling...Congrats and a blessed life, dear Daughter of the Moon! Kim Patrice :)

Hija De La Luna
Date: 12/4/2014 5:21:00 PM

sweet, lovely words, Kim! looking forward to your response to the muse' calling...thank you for the visit! :))

Poetiq1der Simmons

Date: 12/3/2014 6:43:00 PM

Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...Soft and beautiful... Like Music in the rain.

Hija De La Luna
Date: 12/3/2014 11:43:00 PM

lovely words, thank you! Peace and God's blessings, too!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/3/2014 9:52:00 AM

ooh my, now I am hushed by your lilting words, hija... thanks for being part of my contest with top congrats!

Hija De La Luna
Date: 12/3/2014 11:53:00 PM

thank you, nette!! so glad the words i breathed in this piece touched you...grateful to be read and rated highly by you!! thanks for the inspiration :))