Hija De La Luna Poet Verse

Starry Night

his gaze -
starry night sky's
soft rays.

her face
caught the night light,
such grace!

hearts tossed,
perched on the stars -
words lost ....

hija de la luna
11.29.14
for nette onclaud's "whispers of a muse" contest

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John Fleming November 9, 2015 at 2:29 PM This is a lovely muse...Elegant and graceful. Well penned - Best regards! :) john

Debbie Duncan April 21, 2015 at 3:11 AM Nicely done ;)

Scott Thirtyseven February 22, 2015 at 4:55 AM Another piece of magic. Hija De La Luna February 23, 2015 at 6:43 AM Thank you, Scott!

John Fleming December 28, 2014 at 4:54 AM A charming little write, Hija. Cheers! :-) john. Hija De La Luna January 29, 2015 at 10:08 PM Thank you, John!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty December 13, 2014 at 3:38 AM his gaze - starry night sky's soft rays. really soft like winter dream... effect of calm hija. I am ThankfulXXXXX rajat Hija De La Luna December 13, 2014 at 6:56 AM thanks for the visit, Rajat, and leaving a comment! :))

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders December 8, 2014 at 9:05 AM Oh, Wow...perched on the stars...such romantic and beautiful imagery, Hija! Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda Hija De La Luna December 12, 2014 at 10:33 PM thank you, Rhonda! hugs!

Andrea Dietrich December 4, 2014 at 7:03 PM oooh, words lost. LOVE that!!! Congrats, hija de la luna. SHINE ON. Hija De La Luna December 4, 2014 at 10:25 PM ooh, Andrea, you made me smile with your congrats :)) thank you

Regina Mcintosh December 4, 2014 at 12:15 PM Simply beautiful. I enjoyed this. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina Hija De La Luna December 4, 2014 at 5:20 PM so glad you enjoyed this, Regina! God bless you, too! Love and light!

Kp Nunez December 4, 2014 at 7:25 AM Breathtakingly sweet, this poem is not only romantic, it also inspires this reader to write something in response to the muse' calling...Congrats and a blessed life, dear Daughter of the Moon! Kim Patrice :) Hija De La Luna December 4, 2014 at 5:21 PM sweet, lovely words, Kim! looking forward to your response to the muse' calling...thank you for the visit! :))

Poetiq1der Simmons December 3, 2014 at 6:43 PM Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...Soft and beautiful... Like Music in the rain. Hija De La Luna December 3, 2014 at 11:43 PM lovely words, thank you! Peace and God's blessings, too!

Nette Onclaud December 3, 2014 at 9:52 AM ooh my, now I am hushed by your lilting words, hija... thanks for being part of my contest with top congrats! Hija De La Luna December 3, 2014 at 11:53 PM thank you, nette!! so glad the words i breathed in this piece touched you...grateful to be read and rated highly by you!! thanks for the inspiration :))

Maurice Yvonne December 3, 2014 at 9:44 AM WOW!!!! CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FIRST PLACE WIN! A Fav! Hija De La Luna December 3, 2014 at 11:54 PM thank you, Maurice!! i like the WOW!! :))

Jan Allison December 3, 2014 at 9:24 AM sooo romantic many congrats Hija :-) hugs jan xxx Hija De La Luna December 3, 2014 at 11:55 PM thanks, Jan! hugs! :))

Tim Smith December 3, 2014 at 9:17 AM Stopping back with congratulations.... Hugs Tim Hija De La Luna December 3, 2014 at 11:55 PM thank you, Tim! hugs!

Brenda Meier-Hans December 3, 2014 at 8:56 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Hija. I am happy to see you did so well. Hija De La Luna December 4, 2014 at 2:40 AM thank you, Brenda, for sharing the happiness! :))

Liam Mcdaid December 1, 2014 at 5:54 AM really beautifully painted visions hija Hija De La Luna December 2, 2014 at 1:58 AM thank you, liam!

Brenda Meier-Hans November 29, 2014 at 2:52 PM Very beautiful Hija. I love how it grows from him to her to tossed togeather. Hija De La Luna November 29, 2014 at 7:59 PM thanks, Brenda, for the lovely words and the visit!

Tim Smith November 29, 2014 at 1:09 PM Romantic piece Hija...to be perched on the stars..beautiful...hugs Tim Hija De La Luna November 29, 2014 at 8:00 PM thanks, Tim, for finding it beautiful! hugs!