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Starry Night

his gaze -
starry night sky's
soft rays.

her face
caught the night light,
such grace!

hearts tossed,
perched on the stars -
words lost ....

hija de la luna
11.29.14
for nette onclaud's "whispers of a muse" contest

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Date: 11/9/2015 2:29:00 PM
This is a lovely muse...Elegant and graceful. Well penned - Best regards! :) john
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Date: 4/21/2015 3:11:00 AM
Nicely done ;)
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Date: 2/22/2015 4:55:00 AM
Another piece of magic.
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hija de la luna
Date: 2/23/2015 6:43:00 AM
Thank you, Scott!
Date: 12/28/2014 4:54:00 AM
A charming little write, Hija. Cheers! :-) john.
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hija de la luna
Date: 1/29/2015 10:08:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 12/13/2014 3:38:00 AM
his gaze - starry night sky's soft rays. really soft like winter dream... effect of calm hija. I am ThankfulXXXXX rajat
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hija de la luna
Date: 12/13/2014 6:56:00 AM
thanks for the visit, Rajat, and leaving a comment! :))
Date: 12/8/2014 9:05:00 AM
Oh, Wow...perched on the stars...such romantic and beautiful imagery, Hija! Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda
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hija de la luna
Date: 12/12/2014 10:33:00 PM
thank you, Rhonda! hugs!
Date: 12/4/2014 7:03:00 PM
oooh, words lost. LOVE that!!! Congrats, hija de la luna. SHINE ON.
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hija de la luna
Date: 12/4/2014 10:25:00 PM
ooh, Andrea, you made me smile with your congrats :)) thank you
Date: 12/4/2014 12:15:00 PM
Simply beautiful. I enjoyed this. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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hija de la luna
Date: 12/4/2014 5:20:00 PM
so glad you enjoyed this, Regina! God bless you, too! Love and light!
Date: 12/4/2014 7:25:00 AM
Breathtakingly sweet, this poem is not only romantic, it also inspires this reader to write something in response to the muse' calling...Congrats and a blessed life, dear Daughter of the Moon! Kim Patrice :)
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hija de la luna
Date: 12/4/2014 5:21:00 PM
sweet, lovely words, Kim! looking forward to your response to the muse' calling...thank you for the visit! :))
Date: 12/3/2014 6:43:00 PM
Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...Soft and beautiful... Like Music in the rain.
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hija de la luna
Date: 12/3/2014 11:43:00 PM
lovely words, thank you! Peace and God's blessings, too!
Date: 12/3/2014 9:52:00 AM
ooh my, now I am hushed by your lilting words, hija... thanks for being part of my contest with top congrats!
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hija de la luna
Date: 12/3/2014 11:53:00 PM
thank you, nette!! so glad the words i breathed in this piece touched you...grateful to be read and rated highly by you!! thanks for the inspiration :))
Date: 12/3/2014 9:44:00 AM
WOW!!!! CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FIRST PLACE WIN! A Fav!
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hija de la luna
Date: 12/3/2014 11:54:00 PM
thank you, Maurice!! i like the WOW!! :))
Date: 12/3/2014 9:24:00 AM
sooo romantic many congrats Hija :-) hugs jan xxx
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hija de la luna
Date: 12/3/2014 11:55:00 PM
thanks, Jan! hugs! :))
Date: 12/3/2014 9:17:00 AM
Stopping back with congratulations.... Hugs Tim
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hija de la luna
Date: 12/3/2014 11:55:00 PM
thank you, Tim! hugs!
Date: 12/3/2014 8:56:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Hija. I am happy to see you did so well.
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hija de la luna
Date: 12/4/2014 2:40:00 AM
thank you, Brenda, for sharing the happiness! :))
Date: 12/2/2014 12:18:00 PM
Very clever take on this whisper theme, Hija! Step by step to heaven! Lucky pair!:) gl in contest. // paul
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Date: 12/3/2014 10:11:00 AM
Back with congratulations, Hiha! Very merited, too:) // paul
Date: 12/1/2014 5:54:00 AM
really beautifully painted visions hija
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hija de la luna
Date: 12/2/2014 1:58:00 AM
thank you, liam!
Date: 11/29/2014 2:52:00 PM
Very beautiful Hija. I love how it grows from him to her to tossed togeather.
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hija de la luna
Date: 11/29/2014 7:59:00 PM
thanks, Brenda, for the lovely words and the visit!
Date: 11/29/2014 1:09:00 PM
Romantic piece Hija...to be perched on the stars..beautiful...hugs Tim
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hija de la luna
Date: 11/29/2014 8:00:00 PM
thanks, Tim, for finding it beautiful! hugs!