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Starry Night

starlit dreams streaming shadows occluding meaning moonbeams serenade

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/3/2012 11:24:00 AM
Words ending in "ing" are in the Present Perfect tense. Look at your grammar manual, Al!
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Date: 10/3/2012 11:07:00 AM
My understanding of haiku it should be in present tense and its a no, no to use rhyme. So i would work on it.
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Stephen Parker
Date: 10/3/2012 11:20:00 AM
It is written in the present tense! Re-read it! The ing may or may not be considered a rhyme!

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