thriveni c mysore Poet Verse

Starling Murmuration

Twisting, turning, swooping, SWIRLING
Starlings just before dusk
Forms  patterned cloud ILLUSION
Coming together as single

Thousand minds as one
Act in an instant
Who trains them all?
Who leads them all?

RUSTIC charm of birding
Brings rare joy sighting
SILENCE seems to EMANATE
In ambience of forest

SYNTHETIC life in city
Never helps to BLOSSOM
TIMELESS calm of Nature -
A price above priceless.

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Emilia James July 29, 2024 at 1:01 PM Congratualtions on your win Thriveni. Enjoyed your poem. I have not seen this happen in real life but do enjoy the company of birds and the starlings I get to see that visit my garden. Emilia : ) thriveni c mysore July 30, 2024 at 7:04 PM Thank you for your kind visit. Starlings are beautiful birds. I appreciate your comments and your time. Blessings & cheers.

David Crandall July 27, 2024 at 11:02 PM Great poem Thriveni! Yeah, how do they all move at once, like one mind?! My son and his fiance are avid birdwatchers. What a great hobby! thriveni c mysore July 28, 2024 at 2:16 AM there are many theories to explain that behavior, but I am not truly convinced of any. I am into birding too. It is very difficult to gain confidence of birds. Thank you for your visit dear poet. Pleased to know you have bird-watchers, it becomes a passion. Blessings & cheers.

William Kelii Kekaula July 27, 2024 at 11:38 AM At the start, thought it an aliteration, but it would not matter either way. my compliments on your terse verse. Aloha William thriveni c mysore July 27, 2024 at 7:58 PM It did, but I let go off her (alliteration) and moved on with another partner, ha. Thank you so much for your kind visit and words dear poet. Blessings & cheers

Paula Goldsmith July 27, 2024 at 8:53 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative write.   Have a blessed weekend with your win....................... thriveni c mysore July 27, 2024 at 7:56 PM Thank you so much dear poet. Thank you for the blessings. Cheers.

Joseph May July 27, 2024 at 5:12 AM Very nicely penne, Congrats on your win thriveni c mysore July 27, 2024 at 7:56 PM Thank you dear poet. Grateful for the placement. Blessings & cheers.

Karen Croft July 23, 2024 at 10:26 PM Enjoyed reading your poem it flowed beautifully thriveni c mysore July 24, 2024 at 1:26 AM Thank you dear poet. I appreciate your kin words. Blessings & cheers