Starling

gleaming feathers shine whilst the songbird sweetly sings - a melodic tune --------- Songbird haiku Poetry Contest Starling 8/18/2021

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Date: 8/23/2021 11:10:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku. Congratulations on your win!

Avery Won
Date: 8/24/2021 4:35:00 AM

Thank you!

Date: 8/23/2021 3:12:00 PM

yes, their feathers shine, as I recall. So pretty! Congrats

Avery Won
Date: 8/24/2021 4:35:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea :)

Date: 8/23/2021 9:58:00 AM

These simple, humble little birds have a beautiful song. Congratulations on your win Avery.

Avery Won
Date: 8/23/2021 10:12:00 AM

Thanks, Sam :)

Date: 8/23/2021 5:40:00 AM

Lovely, Congrats. Love, Gina (GOD BLESS YOU ALWAYS)

Avery Won
Date: 8/23/2021 5:51:00 AM

Thank you so much :)

Date: 8/23/2021 5:19:00 AM

Beautiful read out loud! Congratulations!

Avery Won
Date: 8/23/2021 5:51:00 AM

Thank you, Kim!

Date: 8/23/2021 4:29:00 AM

Avery, congratulations on your first place win with your beautiful haiku!

Avery Won
Date: 8/23/2021 4:43:00 AM

Thank you Tania!

Date: 8/18/2021 12:12:00 PM

beautifully penned Avery:-) hugs Jan xx

Avery Won
Date: 8/18/2021 1:11:00 PM

Thank you :)

Date: 8/18/2021 5:53:00 AM

Very nice. Well done :)

Avery Won
Date: 8/18/2021 6:15:00 AM

Thanks!