Starling

gleaming feathers shine
whilst the songbird sweetly sings -
a melodic tune 


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Songbird haiku Poetry Contest
Starling
8/18/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Alex Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 11:10 PM
Beautiful Haiku. Congratulations on your win!
Won Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 4:35 AM
Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 3:12 PM
yes, their feathers shine, as I recall. So pretty! Congrats
Won Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 4:35 AM
Thank you, Andrea :)
Kauffman Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 9:58 AM
These simple, humble little birds have a beautiful song. Congratulations on your win Avery.
Won Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 10:12 AM
Thanks, Sam :)
Mcintosh Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 5:40 AM
Lovely, Congrats. Love, Gina (GOD BLESS YOU ALWAYS)
Won Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 5:51 AM
Thank you so much :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 5:19 AM
Beautiful read out loud! Congratulations!
Won Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 5:51 AM
Thank you, Kim!
Kitchin Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 4:29 AM
Avery, congratulations on your first place win with your beautiful haiku!
Won Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 4:43 AM
Thank you Tania!
Allison Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 12:12 PM
beautifully penned Avery:-) hugs Jan xx
Won Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 1:11 PM
Thank you :)
Sands Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 5:53 AM
Very nice. Well done :)
Won Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 6:15 AM
Thanks!
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