Staring Contest

STARING CONTEST challenge of silence one turns blue with guffaw cheeks eye contact shatters 7/16/2017 senryu form

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Lewis Raynes

Date: 8/6/2017 10:38:00 PM

An eye opening topic for a beaut little poem. I love this one, :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/7/2017 1:03:00 AM

Thanks, Lewis!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2017 3:48:00 PM

GREAT description of those stare downs, Kim!! By the way, on your first date contest, I have a question. Soupmail.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2017 3:56:00 PM

Will check it out. Thanks!

Chris Green

Date: 7/17/2017 9:41:00 AM

I never thought of if like that but what a great way to get kids to keep quiet for a little while. I'll have to suggest these contests every now and then. Nice one Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2017 10:23:00 AM

So true! Thanks!

Maria Williams

Date: 7/17/2017 9:40:00 AM

I remember those. A great senryu Kim. Brought back good memories...Maria

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2017 10:22:00 AM

Thanks, Maria! :)

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 7/17/2017 9:36:00 AM

Very clever. I remember those days.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2017 9:37:00 AM

Thanks!